Comments on: Secretly Intent http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/ Stop by, stay awhile, have a pint or two... Fri, 19 Apr 2013 23:50:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 By: deana http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/comment-page-1/#comment-2400 deana Sun, 13 Jan 2013 17:36:50 +0000 http://sassyirishlassie.com/?p=1881#comment-2400 Intriguing!

]]> By: Velvet Verbosity http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/comment-page-1/#comment-2399 Velvet Verbosity Sun, 13 Jan 2013 17:08:10 +0000 http://sassyirishlassie.com/?p=1881#comment-2399 This is a superb example of “showing, not telling”. You brought us fully into the scene, and the mood.

(You might want to fix the typo “presences” – I almost didn’t notice it since everything else flowed, but on second reading it stood out.)

]]> By: Tara R. http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/comment-page-1/#comment-2394 Tara R. Sat, 12 Jan 2013 02:00:14 +0000 http://sassyirishlassie.com/?p=1881#comment-2394 That last line made me jump. Good tension in this piece.

]]> By: barbara http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/comment-page-1/#comment-2393 barbara Sat, 12 Jan 2013 00:21:14 +0000 http://sassyirishlassie.com/?p=1881#comment-2393 dun – dun – dun .. .

good stuff, this!

]]> By: sandra tyler http://sassyirishlassie.com/2013/01/secretly-intent/comment-page-1/#comment-2384 sandra tyler Fri, 11 Jan 2013 03:32:50 +0000 http://sassyirishlassie.com/?p=1881#comment-2384 oh, a bit ominous. Makes me want to know what comes next!

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